This story exposes the depth of Trish's heartache, yet leaves us hopeful that she will eventually reconnect. Linda Bernal's style is understated yet completely thorough. I enjoyed reading it!
From one Linda to another, your story sounds as if you have been in Trish's shoes. You've just written a heart-wrenching account of every mother's nightmare.
Excellent job! Very realistic in its emotional detail. I'm curious about your inspiration for this one. And thinking maybe this could be the title story of a future collection?
This story exposes the depth of Trish's heartache, yet leaves us hopeful that she will eventually reconnect. Linda Bernal's style is understated yet completely thorough. I enjoyed reading it!
Linda, so happy to see you here! Congratulations on your beautiful story.
The first steps toward recovery after a heart-wrenching experience. Very inspiring narrative. Congratulations for a story well told.
Great voice and pacing. Beautiful story about loss and finding your way back. I'll look forward to more of your work.
From one Linda to another, your story sounds as if you have been in Trish's shoes. You've just written a heart-wrenching account of every mother's nightmare.
Excellent job! Very realistic in its emotional detail. I'm curious about your inspiration for this one. And thinking maybe this could be the title story of a future collection?