I loved this story. Wonderful tension, pitch-perfect.
This story perfectly captures the fears of childhood and the loss of innocence. A powerful work.
Well done. An exceptional balance of light and darkness with a touch of mystery.
The paragraph about the alligator shoes works as a story in itself. The conflict of love, especially for a parent, is handled expertly.
I loved this story. Wonderful tension, pitch-perfect.
This story perfectly captures the fears of childhood and the loss of innocence. A powerful work.
Well done. An exceptional balance of light and darkness with a touch of mystery.
The paragraph about the alligator shoes works as a story in itself. The conflict of love, especially for a parent, is handled expertly.