Ordinary Time

An iStory

by Mike Miner
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Beautiful ending.

Florence Roberts replied on Fri, 06/01/2012 - 01:24pm

This story is so tender! It did a great job of capturing the change in a relationship. There is bitterness, frustration, satisfaction of getting even and love in this little piece.

Reva Rasmussen replied on Sun, 08/12/2012 - 07:29am

Mike Miner packs a punch in so few words... love it.

Wendy Ortiz replied on Wed, 10/10/2012 - 08:13pm
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