Water

by Ladan Osman
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Nicely done, Ladan. Congratulations.

Alan Heffez replied on Mon, 12/24/2012 - 06:18am

A beautiful poem, I especially loved the images and the flow (of the water).

Joyce Jacobson replied on Thu, 12/27/2012 - 07:02am

I love the use of imagery, the diction, the abstract nature of the poem, the evocative impact the poem has on the reader . . . brilliant!

Patrick Mugerwa replied on Tue, 06/10/2014 - 07:45pm
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