Primal

by Greg Miller
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Pretty grand writing. I feel like I was tossed into an ocean of words, sent flying through time and caves of truth, rounded out by an adventure too long to say with one breath. Your voice echoed into some hollow I had either forgotten or had not experienced. Knockout poem, one that rushes you like sea water over sand. Left me looking for bones of unicorns.

A beautiful series of epiphanies where we are allowed to experience the poet's sense of awe and wonder. I especially loved the near-final wonderment where we decide together. Thank you, Greg Miller.