I enjoyed the clear, fine writing; I think of the times one tries to wipe the memory clean of some incident and still it reappears like a gopher in a field of dreams . . . the sentiment for your father and view of yourself leaves a ping of pain that changes the landscape of the poem. Good work there.
I enjoyed the clear, fine writing; I think of the times one tries to wipe the memory clean of some incident and still it reappears like a gopher in a field of dreams . . . the sentiment for your father and view of yourself leaves a ping of pain that changes the landscape of the poem. Good work there.