This must be an internet underworld fantasy but the fine grained details make it feel credible and I wonder how close is this might be to someone's reality. What a wonderful and eccentric imagination the author has. Definitely a story you will want to read.
Dwight Frankfather replied on Sun, 01/26/2014 - 04:48pm
I'm still getting chills! Great pacing, development, wording. How did you get the idea for this story: it's so original! I was a confused initially with the conjunctions as story breaks, but I see why it was needed and it's definitely more preferable to a complete break that would have ruined the flow and tempo.
Cory is an enigmatic character done right. I love the last section at the coffee shop and Jo's reaction. You really kept me hooked and unsuspecting.
This is such a wonderful story. I stayed up last night to read it and I was so full of awe and admiration and envy! An original story. I wish I'd written it!
CHIKODILI EMELUMADU replied on Mon, 03/03/2014 - 12:17pm
This must be an internet underworld fantasy but the fine grained details make it feel credible and I wonder how close is this might be to someone's reality. What a wonderful and eccentric imagination the author has. Definitely a story you will want to read.
I'm still getting chills! Great pacing, development, wording. How did you get the idea for this story: it's so original! I was a confused initially with the conjunctions as story breaks, but I see why it was needed and it's definitely more preferable to a complete break that would have ruined the flow and tempo.
Cory is an enigmatic character done right. I love the last section at the coffee shop and Jo's reaction. You really kept me hooked and unsuspecting.
Please write more short stories, Gina!
This is such a wonderful story. I stayed up last night to read it and I was so full of awe and admiration and envy! An original story. I wish I'd written it!