Perfect

A Story

by Carolyn Murdoch

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Wonderful story!

Mary Dicker replied on Sun, 10/20/2013 - 03:54pm

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Nicely done. A very relatable scenario.

Lynne Favreau replied on Mon, 10/21/2013 - 03:56am

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I was captivated by your story and felt the raw emotions so exquisitely expressed. Particularly enjoyed the passage "And she wasn't a foolish woman."

laura higgins replied on Mon, 10/21/2013 - 08:09am

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