Good use of specific detail to create visuals. I was there on the boat as it pitched. Well done. I want to know what happens. Will they meet again--or was she just a girl on a boat?
Kathleen Lewis replied on Sun, 11/03/2013 - 07:57pm
Took me back to this past summer's adventure--being in a small sailboat in a substantial gale on Georgia Strait--my first of experience of feeling mauled by the mindless power of the sea.
Good use of specific detail to create visuals. I was there on the boat as it pitched. Well done. I want to know what happens. Will they meet again--or was she just a girl on a boat?
Took me back to this past summer's adventure--being in a small sailboat in a substantial gale on Georgia Strait--my first of experience of feeling mauled by the mindless power of the sea.