I am absolutely stunned by this poem: the mood, imagery, form, rhythm, edge. I loved the lines "sacrifice me/to whichever gods you think left . . ." and "head craving a hell or heaven/that is saltless, mapless." This one is going to stick with me.
Heather Brittain Bergstrom replied on Mon, 07/14/2014 - 09:03pm
Whoa! Exquisite!
I am absolutely stunned by this poem: the mood, imagery, form, rhythm, edge. I loved the lines "sacrifice me/to whichever gods you think left . . ." and "head craving a hell or heaven/that is saltless, mapless." This one is going to stick with me.