Theater of War

by Jeffrey Brown
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Decorously perfect line lengths. I'm left breathing fast as a soldier with PTSD. I feel her/his panic, gasping. Bravo!

Phyllis Price replied on Tue, 10/07/2014 - 04:57pm

The second half, particularly, draws me in dramatically.

Antonia. Lewandowski replied on Wed, 10/22/2014 - 11:24am
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