Wow. What a story. What a pace. If I told someone, this is what happened--it wouldn't touch what it was like to read this. Talk about layered. Talk about tension. Talk about longing. Oh, just read it.
Sandra Scofield replied on Wed, 03/02/2016 - 02:23pm
In an age in which it is widely preached and believed that sex is jut sex, this narrative provides a clear view into why that's false. But, why should that be a bad thing, sex not just being sex, particularly for women? It's not. I felt the narrator's human longing; I groaned and rolled my eyes when she began to get curious and vocalize that curiosity; my heart sank, with empathy, at her week-long battle with anxiety and obsessive thoughts. I really enjoyed this story. It had a natural flow and every sentence inspired me to continue reading.
Wow. What a story. What a pace. If I told someone, this is what happened--it wouldn't touch what it was like to read this. Talk about layered. Talk about tension. Talk about longing. Oh, just read it.
Beautiful!
A wonderful story. Poignantly and beautifully told. Thank you!
In an age in which it is widely preached and believed that sex is jut sex, this narrative provides a clear view into why that's false. But, why should that be a bad thing, sex not just being sex, particularly for women? It's not. I felt the narrator's human longing; I groaned and rolled my eyes when she began to get curious and vocalize that curiosity; my heart sank, with empathy, at her week-long battle with anxiety and obsessive thoughts. I really enjoyed this story. It had a natural flow and every sentence inspired me to continue reading.
This is such an inspiration, this is how I want to write! Bravo, on such a wonderful, touching story!