Brilliant short story. Follows Kurt Vonnegut's "rules" for writing a short story; not an easy task. I look forward to Ms. Veena's next story.
This is a moving story. The ending was like the affair between the characters -- sudden, swift, and decisive. And, like the affair, it left me wanting more.
What a fine, fresh, vigorous story!
Brilliant short story. Follows Kurt Vonnegut's "rules" for writing a short story; not an easy task. I look forward to Ms. Veena's next story.
This is a moving story. The ending was like the affair between the characters -- sudden, swift, and decisive. And, like the affair, it left me wanting more.
What a fine, fresh, vigorous story!