The best I’ve read in a very long time. I paused for my own beach memories when my parents and the other parents seemed more like romantic couples than ever in daily life. The last of the four passed away last week. It’s her blue eyes and red lipstick I remember most.
Reba J McMellon replied on Mon, 11/28/2022 - 05:52pm
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Great story - great writing! Would love to read more from Robin Politan...
Well done! Very descriptive - a lot of strong emotions in very few words.
Very atmospheric story. Loved the descriptions. Held my breath for the end, hoping it would end as it did. Very well done.
The best I’ve read in a very long time. I paused for my own beach memories when my parents and the other parents seemed more like romantic couples than ever in daily life. The last of the four passed away last week. It’s her blue eyes and red lipstick I remember most.