Some lovely turns of phrases and descriptions—"There was also Satan, a kind of sidekick compadre. The Joker to Jesus’s Batman"—and similes and analogies. It reads like poetry, and of course, we now know about the importance of faith in making ice cream: “That’s the thing about ice cream,” she can hear him saying behind her, “you just gotta have faith.” Thanks for the read, Rae. Fellow writer and neighbor.
Ashley Collie replied on Tue, 09/17/2024 - 07:47pm
Didn’t want the story to end, was so interesting to read.
Some lovely turns of phrases and descriptions—"There was also Satan, a kind of sidekick compadre. The Joker to Jesus’s Batman"—and similes and analogies. It reads like poetry, and of course, we now know about the importance of faith in making ice cream: “That’s the thing about ice cream,” she can hear him saying behind her, “you just gotta have faith.” Thanks for the read, Rae. Fellow writer and neighbor.