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A Story

by May Kuroiwa
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I very much enjoyed this story. The characters and the setting were vivid and the the narrative had definite rhythm. Beautifully written.

Andrea Reynolds replied on Sun, 06/27/2021 - 04:20pm

Wonderful folklore! This story captivated me throughout. I am hoping for a part-two.

Patti Ross replied on Sun, 07/04/2021 - 06:08pm
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