Really unusual, haunting, and beautiful poetry. I read these over and over. I like the imagery in all of them. The first poem was disturbing and made me wonder what was going to happen to the family by the pool. Why did he want to kill them, why the violence? The last poem was a beautiful thought, to be made as beautiful as a voice. I enjoyed the experience of reading your work, and would like to read more.
Really unusual, haunting, and beautiful poetry. I read these over and over. I like the imagery in all of them. The first poem was disturbing and made me wonder what was going to happen to the family by the pool. Why did he want to kill them, why the violence? The last poem was a beautiful thought, to be made as beautiful as a voice. I enjoyed the experience of reading your work, and would like to read more.