Great story! It held my interest from the first line to the last. Lean and to the point, yet full of rich imagery. Not one extra word, and not one word too little.
Sandra Chamson replied on Sun, 06/07/2009 - 02:13pm
Yes, a very lean story. I wonder if all societal roles are as open ended as the story and the characters lives within it? Although Kellerman lived and functioned in the box of his occupation, he seemed the only one who had found his role without questioning what was next. This story leaves one to ponder many questions. Nice job. The bell tolls for Blake.
Great story! It held my interest from the first line to the last. Lean and to the point, yet full of rich imagery. Not one extra word, and not one word too little.
Yes, a very lean story. I wonder if all societal roles are as open ended as the story and the characters lives within it? Although Kellerman lived and functioned in the box of his occupation, he seemed the only one who had found his role without questioning what was next. This story leaves one to ponder many questions. Nice job. The bell tolls for Blake.
Captivating. Simple truth told achingly clear. Blake's question echoes my own.