Great movement and rhythm to this piece. I enjoy the way the short sentences pull you along, slow you down, make you pause before heading off again. It suits the subject matter, which is full of stops, starts, quickness and slowness.
Michele Shoemaker replied on Fri, 01/01/2010 - 06:04am
Pretty damn good.
Your writing continues to move me. You are an amazing talent.
Great movement and rhythm to this piece. I enjoy the way the short sentences pull you along, slow you down, make you pause before heading off again. It suits the subject matter, which is full of stops, starts, quickness and slowness.