Four Poems

by Sherwin Bitsui
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Your writing has amazing imagery. I like the way that this ripples and flows. Amazing!

Mary Crawford replied on Sat, 11/21/2009 - 05:05pm

The imagery is great, but you are very angry. This poem ripples and flows more like thunder, clouds, and pouring rain on old hurts not mended.

Patricia Morin replied on Mon, 05/09/2011 - 10:25pm
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