The setting is beautifully rendered, the narrator clear and true, the climactic moment as the characters' hands touch each other, and the resolution as he looks back on the sounds her heels made make this piece a sound example of what it is I love about short short fiction. Thank you, Michael, for this contribution to Narrative Magazine.
The setting is beautifully rendered, the narrator clear and true, the climactic moment as the characters' hands touch each other, and the resolution as he looks back on the sounds her heels made make this piece a sound example of what it is I love about short short fiction. Thank you, Michael, for this contribution to Narrative Magazine.