Keeping Up

by Jay Deshpande
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I liked this piece a lot, especially when each Kardashian whispered "intimate" thoughts to the camera inside her lover.

Lisa Jo Finstrom replied on Wed, 01/09/2013 - 05:56am

Just brilliant!

Susan Fernbach replied on Wed, 01/09/2013 - 08:07am

This is one of the best pieces I've read in a while.

Marisa Silva-Dunbar replied on Wed, 01/09/2013 - 10:23am

I keep coming back to reread this piece to enjoy the critique and the accompanying wariness of the reified seduction being described. Nicely developed, Jay.

Alan Heffez replied on Mon, 03/04/2013 - 01:53pm

This is wonderful, a fantasy poem which is a genre I just discovered.

Sharon Goodier replied on Sat, 07/06/2013 - 01:45pm
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